OneWhoListens's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Thermodynamics, again]

Cute!

I really like it, and it speaks to me as a computer science student. But the last frame, used as the representation, is by itself a little misleading. Otherwise, vrey cute and enjoyable!

Vonschlippe responds:

Hmm you're right, I should recrop it.... one sec!
Thanks for the review ^^

[Rays of the Black]

Nice, but just not enough appeal.

It certainly isn't ugly, but it doesn't really give you a reason to want to look at it.

I like the background, but the lines against it don't do much, and the contrast is way too low. Maybe if the lines looked like they were exploding out of the side or something, or if they had a burst of color against the mottled pallid gray background.

[Abby]

Wow.

Very creative and fun to look at. Looks really nice, great lighting.

[Monster Robot from Outerspace!]

That is such a perfect representation.

That's exactly what a poster from that era would look like (minus the swear), with just the right colors, style, and feel. Great job! Really fun to look at.

[Santa's workshop year 2209]

Very fun.

Some of the foreground elements are a bit too stark but the picture on the whole is very cute and pleasant to look at. Very creative.

Lundsfryd responds:

Thanks :)

[Girls Girls Girls!]

Mmm, sexy.

Not perfect, but good. It's hard to place, but some of the lines and contrasts here seem too sharp and detract from the ambiance.

Basically, though, this is a really nice piece, and definitely fun to look at!

[AG]

Perfect.

This has an awesome combination of surreal, abstract, and concrete elements that come together to bring forth a very mysterious and evocative picture. It touches at once the fear of the unknown and the fascination of the real. The rough texture finishes it well and gives it flavour.
Great choice of colors, too, great job overall! Really nice.

[childs room day]

Very cool.

Very real, aside for the light on the wall from the window and possibly the bed covers, which are a little overdone. Still, a cool image, makes me really feel like I'm there.

[Gear series6]

Nice

It has a very realistic feeling yet at the same time seems larger than life, reality plus some. That's the sort of thing that people really groove on, definitely including me. If you do more full structures with this sort of feel, you will rule this portal.

onionahoy responds:

Thanks. I'll try to do more, with a bit of
(Reality +)®
:P

[White Collar Cow]

Lol cool

Could use a little color though. Very nice otherwise!