OneWhoListens's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[alone in the cold]

The footprints are in front...did the character walk backwards to the edge of the cliff or turn around at the end?
I'm just curious. It's a very nice piece. I like the way the ice sparkles.

crescend responds:

the way i thought about it while drawing was that the character was walking towards the cliff and then decided to turn around to see the northern lights, i'd assume walking backwards near a cliff might be a little bit too dangerous haha. also thank you and nice that you caught that! (btw i was so happy abt sparkles im glad u noticed that too hehe)

[Cats from life]

Very lifelike. I can feel the alert interest in the one on the right.

kittenbombs1 responds:

thanks, he's my baby boy

[In my garden]

This is really good! The bird is much more realistic than the background, and I think, for me at least, that's causing some depth to be missing.

Tapersteve responds:

Many thanks I was attempting to cause a focal point by keeping the background loose I may rework the background though

[old bobby hill]

He looks sad :/ but this is great work.

alexapdos responds:

with age comes wisdom

[Halloween]

Wow, really engaging!

Enjoyyourlife8 responds:

Thank youu!

[Milo of Croton painting study]

Wow, this is really impressive. I can't imagine how you managed to so successfully replicate this, yet here it is. I appreciate the care taken with the lighting, and the result looks great!

Zingoo responds:

Thanks! I actually made a little video (& gif) going through the process if you're curious
www.zingoogniz.tumblr.com/post/120657411537/my-process

[Cycling]

Very nice! Not to be a perfectionist but the cyclist's nose looks transparent and that's bugging me a bit, unless that's my own error of viewing.

aap responds:

Thanks! The nose is not transparent but I can see why it appears so to you, the colour of the nose is very similar to the background!

[Thermodynamics, again]

Cute!

I really like it, and it speaks to me as a computer science student. But the last frame, used as the representation, is by itself a little misleading. Otherwise, vrey cute and enjoyable!

Vonschlippe responds:

Hmm you're right, I should recrop it.... one sec!
Thanks for the review ^^

[Santa's workshop year 2209]

Very fun.

Some of the foreground elements are a bit too stark but the picture on the whole is very cute and pleasant to look at. Very creative.

Lundsfryd responds:

Thanks :)

[Gear series6]

Nice

It has a very realistic feeling yet at the same time seems larger than life, reality plus some. That's the sort of thing that people really groove on, definitely including me. If you do more full structures with this sort of feel, you will rule this portal.

onionahoy responds:

Thanks. I'll try to do more, with a bit of
(Reality +)®
:P