Sarai 2008-05-02 14:27:33

I don't see the themes

python862 2008-05-02 14:51:30

Nice play on words at the end, but like the others have said, I didn't see use of the themes provided. Good story, though.

positively-negative 2008-05-03 08:24:32

Judged, want my comments PM

Monocrom 2008-05-04 03:19:19

Read your story. Keeping detailed notes for final judgement at end of month.

phantomlassuk 2008-05-20 20:46:56

Your aviator cool