OneWhoListens's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[duda]

Why two minutes?

This is one very short loop repeated for the duration of a song. What is the point?
Try harder next time.

[as far as you can]

Not too bad.

I'm not sure the voice samples actually help anything, but nice beat / instruments!

[Jungle Slide Express]

This isn't perfect

But it definitely deserves more than the 0.42 it had before I voted on it.

It's a cute little loop, very uppity, could become annoying to listen to after a couple of minutes. Also doesn't loop perfectly.

Not bad though.

[Drake (DNVB) ~dnb~]

Doesn't work.

For so many reasons, this song just does not work at all. I can definitely see some elements that have potential, like around 0:50 - 1:00, but these are an exception to the rule that is the rest of the song.

Too many odd scratches and sounds that clash.

[Gabry Bass]

I don't know why everyone 0-bombed this.

Unless it's stolen or something. But aside for being endlessly repetitive and having no real ending, this is a pretty cool song.

[Something Evil Drifts]

Good for a start

As previous reviewers have remarked, a real song takes more than just adding a few beats together along with some bass. The voice clips especially are very cheesy as they are the default ones included with FL and are used far too often.
Try obtaining more samples and playing around with the piano roll and patterns to create new beats of different varieties.

ZombiePowerDrink responds:

I appreciate the remarks and will probably buy the full software and really put an effort in next time.

[Koltred - DNB 38]

Could be worse I guess.

I like dnb but I don't like this. Very manufactured sounding.

[Stepping Stones]

Needs variation.

You can't make all the instruments all do the same thing all the way through, it just doesn't sound good.

Make your tune longer and more varied, change up the beat a little and then you'll have a song.

[Rasta bassline]

Nothing here

This entire "song" is just modified preloaded beats and sliced voice clips with some bass.

I know this review is coming in way late, but if by chance you do read this, consider doing more next time.

[Destroy Me]

It's actually a little bit catchy.

But it's very repetitive and kind of annoying. After about halfway through it starts breaking down and getting more annoying than interesting.